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Prologue: Clients, persuasion, and storytelling |
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The recursive process of writing |
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The sample scenarios and briefs |
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Part I Introduction to storytelling and client centered lawyering |
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I Client needs and goals in litigation |
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II Ethical considerations |
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A Providing competent service |
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B Being a zealous advocate |
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C Respecting client autonomy |
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D Keeping client secrets: client confidentiality |
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III The client as a key audience |
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IV Getting started: learning about your client |
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2 Understanding persuasion |
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A Logos: the substance of the argument |
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B Pathos: appealing to our audience's emotions |
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C Ethos: the credibility of the advocate |
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D Putting it all together: persuasion requires logos, pathos, and ethos |
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2 Build empathy for your client's position |
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3 Establish your own credibility along with your client's |
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II Audience responses to persuasion |
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E Stock structures in persuasion |
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1 Types of stock structures |
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2 Be careful: stock structures are different to different people |
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3 Many legal disputes are centered in a debate about competing stock structures |
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III Calculating how much persuasion is needed |
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A Persuasion compared to coercion |
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B Judge Posner's formula for persuasion |
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3 Story as a tool for persuasion |
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I What is a word like "story" doing in a serious legal writing course? |
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II Stories are persuasive, even to lawyers and judges |
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III The biology of storytelling |
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IV The storyteller's tool box |
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A Structural tools for the legal writer |
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B Stylistic tools for the legal writer |
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1 Description and the selection of details |
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Part II Developing the client's story |
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4 Thinking about the audience |
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I Trial judge: mentor to the client |
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A Judges want to "get it right" |
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B Role of the trial court as fact finder |
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C Respect for higher authority |
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II Appellate judge: mentor to the trial judge? |
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5 Investigating the facts |
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I Facts require context to understand them |
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II A four step process to thinking about fact investigation |
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A First step: what facts are legally relevant? |
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B Second step: what is the chronology? |
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C Third step: does it all make sense? |
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D Step four: have you made any assumptions that might suggest more fact investigation? |
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III Tools for fact investigation |
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A Two types of facts: adjudicative and legislative |
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B Tools for discovering facts beyond what the client knows |
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F Informal discussion with opposing counsel |
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6 Understanding the client's problem in its legal context |
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I Identifying the legal issues |
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B Identify possible issues within the domain |
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II Organizing your research |
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A Commercial research programs |
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B Create your own database |
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1 Creating the issues list |
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2 Creating the database of authorities |
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III Selecting the issues to write about |
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A Arranging your research results |
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C Selecting the issues for deeper analysis |
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7 Representing your client, the protagonist |
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I The client as a character in the legal story |
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B Using your client's back story: competing considerations |
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C Your client's character will have weaknesses |
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D The client's narrow and broad goals |
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II Other character roles in the legal action |
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A The opposing party: gatekeepers or shape shifters rather than villains |
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B Judges, witnesses, and lawyers |
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III The client's obstacle: the conflict type of lawsuit |
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IV Finding your client's archetype |
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A Selecting a heroic archetype |
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B Missing information and reasonable inferences |
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V Identifying the central conflict your client faces |
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8 Telling the client's story: plot, conflict, and story types |
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A Introduction/exposition |
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B Complicating incident/rising action |
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D Resolution/falling action |
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Part III Creating the working draft |
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9 Starting to write: shadow stories and working drafts of the Facts section |
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I The first parts of writing: sketching a "shadow" draft of the Facts section |
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A What is the shadow story, and why do we need it? |
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B Identifying your theme via the shadow story |
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C The theme is not the theory but runs in parallel |
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D Why the shadow story remains in the shadows |
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II Writing a working draft of the Statement of Facts |
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A Incorporating the theme into your brief |
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B Use citable facts instead of unsupported opinions |
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C Showing versus telling the story |
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1 Descriptions of actions, settings, objects, and (sometimes) characters |
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2 Selecting the specific details for the descriptions |
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III Putting down the working draft of the Facts section |
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10 Working with the law, part 1: interpreting statutes |
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B Reading the statute critically |
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1 To whom does the statute apply? |
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2 Does the statute provide any express definitions of key terms? |
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3 What does the statute require, permit, or prohibit? |
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4 What are the exceptions to the general rule? |
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5 What is the consequence of not complying? |
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6 When does the statute apply? |
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II Text based interpretive tools |
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2 Canons regarding specific words |
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3 Canon regarding grammar |
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4 Canons regarding lists of things |
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1 The statutory context: definitions and in pari materia |
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2 Consider the historical context |
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1 Punitive statutes are to be narrowly construed; remedial statutes are to be broadly construed |
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2 Constitutional interpretations are favored over unconstitutional interpretations |
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3 The legislature does not intend absurd results |
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4 Statutes codifying the common law are to be broadly construed; statutes in derogation of the common law are to be narrowly construed |
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III Purpose based interpretation |
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B Who's talking makes a difference |
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C Not all legislative history is created equal |
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D Hindsight is not insight |
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E No one voted on this stuff |
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VI Administrative interpretations |
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VII How to craft a statutory interpretation argument |
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A Look at the statute through a broader lens to come up with a category |
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B Look for other statutes that fit into the same category |
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C Research related statutes |
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D Communicate to readers that there are analogous interpretations to the statute you are dealing with |
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11 Working with the law, part 2: creating policy arguments |
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I Future world: the uniqueness of policy arguments |
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II When to make policy arguments |
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A Arguments for a new rule in lieu of the existing rule (seeking response changing result) |
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B Arguments for a new rule because there isn't a rule in place (seeking response shaping result) |
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C Arguments about the way to interpret a statutory word or phrase when the law is undeveloped or underdeveloped (seeking either a response shaping or response reinforcing result) |
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III The nature and types of policy arguments |
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A Judicial administration |
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1 The new rule should be firm (or flexible) |
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2 The existing or proposed rule is too complex |
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4 Slippery slope argument |
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C Institutional competence arguments |
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D Social values arguments |
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IV How to make a policy argument |
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B Judgment about the prediction |
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C Support for the prediction and judgment |
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12 Working with the law, part 3: managing adverse material |
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I What kind of adverse material is there? |
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A Adverse aspects about the lawsuit procedures |
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B Disputes about the relevant facts |
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C Disputes about the applicable law |
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II Structuring the counterargument: sidedness and refutation |
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III Considerations when it is unclear whether the opposing party will use the adverse material |
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A Inoculation against adverse material |
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B Deciding when to manage adverse material |
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1 Address adverse material that you are ethically obligated to raise |
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2 Address adverse facts that you know the opposing party will use |
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3 Address and manage the opponent's strongest argument as soon as you bring it up |
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4 Avoid phantom counterarguments and look for the harder ones to manage |
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IV Where to manage the adverse material |
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V Writing counterarguments |
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A Know when you have already made the counterargument |
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B Avoid defensive phrasing of counterarguments |
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C Put the weakest link in the middle |
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D Protect your own ethos: stay away from ad hominem anythings |
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E Make the adverse material consistent with your client's story |
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F Make the word choices of the counterargument match and become part of your overarching story |
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VI Wrap up: this isn't easy, we know |
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13 Writing and organizing the working draft of the argument |
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I Choosing your large scale organization |
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A "Logical flow" structure |
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C "Lead with strength" is the default choice |
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II Roadmaps and headings: signaling the bottom line, up front |
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A Roadmaps lay the groundwork for memory |
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1 Describing the legal structure |
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2 Setting up foundational law |
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B Headings chunk the information |
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C The visual design of headings |
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III Small-scale organization |
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B Traditional structure: CREAC |
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1 Small scale organization of legal analysis |
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C Variations on a theme of CREAC |
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D An outlined argument using the most common CREAC variation |
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3 Factor tests pop up everywhere |
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Part IV Revising, polishing, and finishing |
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14 Revising the Argument: finding your client's point of view |
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I Cognitively priming your readers |
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II Persuading through headings and introductions |
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A Writing persuasive point headings |
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B Setting a persuasive context up front (is there still a C in CREAC?) |
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III Persuasively wording the rules |
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A Client centered imagery |
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B Statutes and common law rules: the same advocacy principles apply |
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IV Rule Explanation: illustrating the rule with precise details and stock structures |
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A The storytelling of the Rule Explanation |
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B Write about cases by putting the bottom line up front |
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C Choosing the length of the Rule Explanation: in text versus parentheticals |
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1 Will an illustration help readers at all? |
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2 How important is the case to the argument? |
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3 How complicated are the facts of the case? |
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D Drafting parentheticals |
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1 Narrative parentheticals |
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A Show how your legal position is consistent with existing precedent (arguing by analogy) |
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B Show how your position is materially different from precedent, and therefore should have the opposite result (arguing by distinction) |
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C Show how the plain meaning of a statute directly supports the result your client wants |
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D If a statute appears to contradict the result your client wants, show how the statute does not apply |
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15 Revising the story: polishing the Statement of Facts |
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I A sequence for revising across the major parts of the document |
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A Reworking any last telling versus showing statements |
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B Organizational revising: headings as a possible strategy to create new beginning points |
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III Revising across the brief |
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A Visual impact moments in the Statement of Facts |
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B Consistency using the facts |
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C Choosing the way to refer to the characters |
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D Strategizing word choices |
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IV What happens next in the writing process? |
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16 Making a first impression: the Preliminary Statement |
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I Planning the Preliminary Statement |
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II Expressing the theme of your Argument |
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A Developing the character in a Preliminary Statement |
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B Developing the conflict and the goal of the story |
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17 Finishing up: the other parts of a brief |
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I Overview: the contents of a brief depend on the rules of the court |
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II Requirements of the Federal Rules of Appellate Procedure |
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1 Corporate Disclosure Statement |
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4 Jurisdictional Statement |
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5 Statement of the Issues |
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8 Summary of the Argument |
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12 Certificate of Compliance |
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18 Creating ethos: tone and branding by good visual design |
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I Document design principles |
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A Contrast with size and weight |
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B Proximity: keep related items related with appropriate spacing |
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C Alignment: justification and tables |
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D Repetition and document consistency |
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II Application and limitations in legal documents |
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19 Persuading in person: oral argument |
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I Setting the stage: the purpose of oral argument |
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II Preparing for argument |
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III Conduct of oral argument |
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Epilogue |
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Appendix A Defendant Arthur Beagle's motion for reconsideration (student brief) |
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Appendix B Plaintiff Elaina Hawthorne's brief in opposition to motion for reconsideration (student brief) |
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Appendix C Plaintiff's brief in support of plaintiff's motion for summary judgment and in opposition to defendant's motion for summary judgment (student brief) |
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Appendix D Defendant's brief in opposition to plaintiffs motion for summary judgment and in support of defendant's motion for summary judgment (student brief) |
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